Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

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Example for my upcoming contest :)

Paradise's Awakenings

Dream...into thoughts of paradise 
A stream turned waterfall arc's a rainbow 
The sun's beam tints the hues 
Reflections of glitter, gleam 
Awaken smiling...to beauty's extreme

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Eve Roper November 7, 2021 at 7:56 PM Great example, Charles.

Krish Radhakrishna November 7, 2021 at 10:58 AM Nice one charles!! My muse is dead! shall try after a double espeesso!

Anisha Dutta November 6, 2021 at 10:42 PM Good example. Trying the contest.

Beata Agustin November 5, 2021 at 6:56 PM Thanks for sharing this.....message as well as the form is delightful and delighting from the start til the end; excellently exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.

Jan Allison October 29, 2021 at 10:20 AM what a fabulous idea for a contest, not sure if i can do it but i will try:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France October 28, 2021 at 5:42 AM Charlie, beautiful image in five lines and I like the format, great example for your contest, hope I can write something worthy ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Tom Cunningham October 28, 2021 at 3:11 AM You captured natures beauty well Charlie. Tom Charles Messina October 28, 2021 at 4:09 AM Thanks Tom... ~Charlie

Joanna Daniel October 28, 2021 at 1:01 AM Beautiful, and nice challenge too, Charles:) Charles Messina October 28, 2021 at 4:10 AM Thank you so much, Jo. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu October 27, 2021 at 4:02 PM Hello Charles Messina, This would be beautiful to wake up to. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 28, 2021 at 11:14 AM Hello Charles, your welcome my friend. I will. You enjoy your day my friend. Charles Messina October 27, 2021 at 7:14 PM Thank you, Darlene. Have a nice evening dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2021 at 2:00 PM wow, I love your example for your contest. Lovely work! Charles Messina October 27, 2021 at 7:15 PM Thank you so much, Andrea!