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Example for my upcoming contest :)

Dream...into thoughts of paradise A stream turned waterfall arc's a rainbow The sun's beam tints the hues Reflections of glitter, gleam Awaken smiling...to beauty's extreme

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Date: 11/7/2021 7:56:00 PM
Great example, Charles.
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Date: 11/7/2021 10:58:00 AM
Nice one charles!! My muse is dead! shall try after a double espeesso!
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Date: 11/6/2021 10:42:00 PM
Good example. Trying the contest.
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Date: 11/5/2021 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this.....message as well as the form is delightful and delighting from the start til the end; excellently exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 10/29/2021 10:20:00 AM
what a fabulous idea for a contest, not sure if i can do it but i will try:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/28/2021 5:42:00 AM
Charlie, beautiful image in five lines and I like the format, great example for your contest, hope I can write something worthy ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 10/28/2021 3:11:00 AM
You captured natures beauty well Charlie. Tom
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/28/2021 4:09:00 AM
Thanks Tom... ~Charlie
Date: 10/28/2021 1:01:00 AM
Beautiful, and nice challenge too, Charles:)
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/28/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. :)
Date: 10/27/2021 4:02:00 PM
Hello Charles Messina, This would be beautiful to wake up to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2021 11:14:00 AM
Hello Charles, your welcome my friend. I will. You enjoy your day my friend.
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/27/2021 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Have a nice evening dear friend.
Date: 10/27/2021 2:00:00 PM
wow, I love your example for your contest. Lovely work!
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/27/2021 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!

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