Balveen Cheema Poet Acrostic

Paradise-Acrostic

Parents kissing and enveloping children in their warmth
                      Always enthused with their crazy ideas abundant
                      Roaring laughter resounding in the cloudy zenith
                      Applause at every singular innocent achievement
                      Discourses and tales on virtues of selfless activities
                      Imbibing values with every smiling action of doyens
                      Singing in a medley of exuberant symphonies 
                      Ecstatically playing with angels in the star decked gardens


                                            December 24, 2015
                                            Contest: Paradise Acrostic
                                            Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:20 PM Balveen, a very nice win. SKAT Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:20 AM Thanks Skat and wish you a joyous & fulfilled 2016!

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:23 AM Balveen, Congratulations on your win. LINDA Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:21 AM Lina, thanks and wish you a bright & happy new year!

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 6:33 PM A VERY DESERVING RENDITION OF A FAMILY PARADISE. Congrats on your win!! A7 Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:23 AM Robert, many thanks and I wish you and your family a stupendously happy new year!

Pandita Sietesantos December 27, 2015 at 5:21 PM Superb acrostic that deserves to be on the winners' list! Congratulations, Balveen, on youw wonderful win! Pandita Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:24 AM Pandita, that was sweet of you to think so! Wish you anda your family a god gifted new year!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:19 PM oh it reminds me of being with children after one has died and playing with those little angels!! But on earth, just giving them lots of love and attention. Nicely woven acrostic. Congrats. Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:26 AM Thanks Andrea! All good wishes and many more bounties in the new year!

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 4:02 AM Congratulations not only on this worthy win, Balveen, but also on your unique take on this theme. ~ Regards // paul Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:30 AM Paul, your generosity in appreciation is always praiseworthy. May the new year bring joyous tidings and blessings!

John Hamilton December 27, 2015 at 12:27 AM Nice acrostic Balveen, congrats on your placement! Balveen Cheema December 29, 2015 at 12:47 AM Thanks and wish you a prosperous new year, John!

Susan Gentry December 24, 2015 at 2:25 AM Wonderful acrostic for the contest! GL! Balveen Cheema December 24, 2015 at 7:21 AM Thanks Susan for your appreciation!