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Bird of Paradise

Paradise Spurned

Strelitzia reginea is utterly pretentious!
Its claim to fame is so contentious!
For it is not a bird, that's absurd!
As sinner impenitent, from paradise it's spurred.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Drowley Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your win! Keep up the fine wiring. PKW
Anderson Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Thanks very much for your kind comments. Cheers and Best Wishes
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 7:29 AM
So concise and clever, conveying a message about how nature imitates nature! CONGRATS, John. Janice
mysore Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:10 PM
true write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 12:49 PM
i love the bird of paradise flowers John, they are so quirky as is your poem! hugs jan xx
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