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Bird of Paradise

Strelitzia reginea is utterly pretentious! Its claim to fame is so contentious! For it is not a bird, that's absurd! As sinner impenitent, from paradise it's spurred.

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Date: 10/12/2024 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Keep up the fine wiring. PKW
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Date: 10/12/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thanks very much for your kind comments. Cheers and Best Wishes
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Date: 10/12/2024 7:29:00 AM
So concise and clever, conveying a message about how nature imitates nature! CONGRATS, John. Janice
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Date: 10/11/2024 11:10:00 PM
true write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/7/2024 12:49:00 PM
i love the bird of paradise flowers John, they are so quirky as is your poem! hugs jan xx
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