Paradise Splendor

Paradise splendor
Enjoying Hawaiian sites...
Sweetheart at the beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Congrats on the 8th place win, Joe
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Glad to see this one in the winners' circle, Joe. You're on a roll today! Love, Carolyn
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July 11, 2010 at 10:35 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Freeman Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations, Joe. on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 10:02 AM
oh, that is so neat how you got in that last line sweetheart at the beach. Congrats, Joe!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Congrats Joe on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this sweet write and lovely depiction of the vacation photos.. thankxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..
K. Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 11:05 AM
nice save Joe-- haha you sure think of everything ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Thankxxx for supporting my contest Joe.. with a great entry.. am home finally.. yeah.. missing all family and pets.. oh my babies.. luv them.. with luv..
K. Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 10:01 AM
very very nice haiku for the Sweetheart, Joe, I'm sure Linda will love this-- btw your Hawaiian is missing an "A" ;) -- and btw you are kidding me, right?? You're actually saying that the notes I wrote you were fake?? How dare you, Joe! hahhahaha--kidding-- seriously, you are so funny! I'm telling your wife about those notes ;) --nikko :)
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