Paradise - Sedoka

A mysterious place
Created for everyone
Some said it's the real heaven
Beyond human's eye
A conundrum to one's mind
Aspiration to all souls.


By: Mari Sadatoku - March 10,2013
      8:17 p.m.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 23, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Mari, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 1, 2016 at 1:07 PM
MARI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
Golden Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 6:19 AM
awesome poem mari
Essence Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Hi I was checking out new poets, came across yours I really like this poem :) ... Welcome!!! GypsyofEssence
Mindova Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:56 AM
HELLO.NICE TO MEET YOU.I AM FROM BULGARIA.
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