Krish Radhakrishna Poet Monoku

Paradise Lost and Regained

he swallowed the wedding ring on wedding day put it on her next day



2nd placement
‘When plans don’t go to plan’ poetry contest
Monoku 17 syllables, no punctuation or capitals.
Sponsor Silent one
Written 27/08/2020

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Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2020 at 2:28 PM hahaha. what a reason to put off a wedding. Congrats. enjoyed the humor Krish Radhakrishna August 31, 2020 at 12:09 AM Thanks Andrea! A wedding to remember!:)

Gershon Wolf August 29, 2020 at 8:53 PM Ingenious write, Krish! Congrats on your win in the contest, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 11:47 PM Thanks Gershon! God bless and best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2020 at 1:08 PM - Congratulations on your great winning line, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 1:43 PM Thank you Anne-Lise! That ring did come out in the end!!:)

Sam Kauffman August 29, 2020 at 11:26 AM Is there a doctor in the house - wink, wink? Murphy's Law in poetry! Congratulations Krish!! Enjoyed this very much. Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 11:46 AM Thanks Sam! Thanks for your lovely words! Kind regards!!

Eve Roper August 29, 2020 at 10:45 AM Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Krish. Congratulations on your win. Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 11:05 AM Thanks Eve! Appreciate your kind words of appreciation! Regards

Michelle Faulkner August 29, 2020 at 9:57 AM I hope he sanitized it first! Very funny, congrats on your win- Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 10:26 AM Thanks Michelle! He was so relieved!!??

Vijay Pandit August 29, 2020 at 9:37 AM Congrats on your podium win, Krish. Lovely, humorous! Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 9:56 AM Thanks Vijay! Thanks for your kind words!:)

Brian Sambourne August 29, 2020 at 6:50 AM This Monoku is number one with me - just inspired wit and humor. Congratulations. Brian Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 7:02 AM Thanks Brian! Honoured with your kind commendation! Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2020 at 6:31 AM Oh no! A bit of a stinker...lol. Congratulations! Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 7:03 AM Thanks Kim! A different route to her heart!

Paul Callus August 29, 2020 at 5:30 AM Lol What an unusual route this ring took to arrive on the bride's finger, Krish!:) Congratulation son your fine win. Regards // paul Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 5:59 AM Thanks Paul! The enteral route of eternal bond! Kind regards!:)

Carol Mitra August 29, 2020 at 5:22 AM Nice write....Congrats Kris on your win. Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 5:24 AM Thanks Carol! Pleased you like it!

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 29, 2020 at 5:10 AM Nice take on the theme. Thanks for your comment on my poem. You may look up my reply. Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 5:23 AM Thanks Subimal! Really like your Monoku!

Line Gauthier August 29, 2020 at 4:35 AM Well spun, Krish. Congrats ~ Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 5:23 AM Thanks Line! Much appreciate your kind words!

Howard Kerr August 29, 2020 at 4:30 AM Hello Krish, Well done and well written. Congratulations. Howard Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 5:24 AM Thanks Howard! Very kind!

Silent One August 29, 2020 at 2:51 AM Oh dear!!! Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Krish Radhakrishna August 29, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thanks for this contest. Mine was a last minute entry and glad I did! Grateful for your encouragement through your contests! They generate some wonderful poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 10:11 AM - ... omg. swallowed the ring ... maybe it will not come tomorrow :))) - A good one, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna August 27, 2020 at 10:13 AM Thanks Anne-Lise!! Happens when one is anxious!!:)