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Paradise Lost and Regained

he swallowed the wedding ring on wedding day put it on her next day 2nd placement ‘When plans don’t go to plan’ poetry contest Monoku 17 syllables, no punctuation or capitals. Sponsor Silent one Written 27/08/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:28:00 PM

hahaha. what a reason to put off a wedding. Congrats. enjoyed the humor

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/31/2020 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Andrea! A wedding to remember!:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2020 8:53:00 PM

Ingenious write, Krish! Congrats on your win in the contest, Gershon

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 11:47:00 PM

Thanks Gershon! God bless and best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise! That ring did come out in the end!!:)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2020 11:26:00 AM

Is there a doctor in the house - wink, wink? Murphy's Law in poetry! Congratulations Krish!! Enjoyed this very much.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Sam! Thanks for your lovely words! Kind regards!!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 10:45:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Krish. Congratulations on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Eve! Appreciate your kind words of appreciation! Regards

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/29/2020 9:57:00 AM

I hope he sanitized it first! Very funny, congrats on your win-

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 10:26:00 AM

Thanks Michelle! He was so relieved!!??

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/29/2020 9:37:00 AM

Congrats on your podium win, Krish. Lovely, humorous!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Vijay! Thanks for your kind words!:)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/29/2020 6:50:00 AM

This Monoku is number one with me - just inspired wit and humor. Congratulations. Brian

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 7:02:00 AM

Thanks Brian! Honoured with your kind commendation! Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2020 6:31:00 AM

Oh no! A bit of a stinker...lol. Congratulations!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Kim! A different route to her heart!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2020 5:30:00 AM

Lol What an unusual route this ring took to arrive on the bride's finger, Krish!:) Congratulation son your fine win. Regards // paul

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:59:00 AM

Thanks Paul! The enteral route of eternal bond! Kind regards!:)

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/29/2020 5:22:00 AM

Nice write....Congrats Kris on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:24:00 AM

Thanks Carol! Pleased you like it!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/29/2020 5:10:00 AM

Nice take on the theme. Thanks for your comment on my poem. You may look up my reply.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:23:00 AM

Thanks Subimal! Really like your Monoku!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2020 4:35:00 AM

Well spun, Krish. Congrats ~

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:23:00 AM

Thanks Line! Much appreciate your kind words!

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/29/2020 4:30:00 AM

Hello Krish, Well done and well written. Congratulations. Howard

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 5:24:00 AM

Thanks Howard! Very kind!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 2:51:00 AM

Oh dear!!! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 AM

Thanks for this contest. Mine was a last minute entry and glad I did! Grateful for your encouragement through your contests! They generate some wonderful poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 10:11:00 AM

- ... omg. swallowed the ring ... maybe it will not come tomorrow :))) - A good one, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/27/2020 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise!! Happens when one is anxious!!:)