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Paradise Lost and Regained

he swallowed the wedding ring on wedding day put it on her next day



2nd placement
‘When plans don’t go to plan’ poetry contest
Monoku 17 syllables, no punctuation or capitals.
Sponsor Silent one
Written 27/08/2020

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/30/2020 2:28:00 PM hahaha. what a reason to put off a wedding. Congrats. enjoyed the humor Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/31/2020 12:09:00 AM Thanks Andrea! A wedding to remember!:)

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/29/2020 8:53:00 PM Ingenious write, Krish! Congrats on your win in the contest, Gershon Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 11:47:00 PM Thanks Gershon! God bless and best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2020 1:08:00 PM - Congratulations on your great winning line, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 1:43:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise! That ring did come out in the end!!:)

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/29/2020 11:26:00 AM Is there a doctor in the house - wink, wink? Murphy's Law in poetry! Congratulations Krish!! Enjoyed this very much. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 11:46:00 AM Thanks Sam! Thanks for your lovely words! Kind regards!!

Eve Roper Date: 8/29/2020 10:45:00 AM Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Krish. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 11:05:00 AM Thanks Eve! Appreciate your kind words of appreciation! Regards

Michelle Faulkner Date: 8/29/2020 9:57:00 AM I hope he sanitized it first! Very funny, congrats on your win- Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 10:26:00 AM Thanks Michelle! He was so relieved!!??

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/29/2020 9:37:00 AM Congrats on your podium win, Krish. Lovely, humorous! Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 9:56:00 AM Thanks Vijay! Thanks for your kind words!:)

Brian Sambourne Date: 8/29/2020 6:50:00 AM This Monoku is number one with me - just inspired wit and humor. Congratulations. Brian Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 7:02:00 AM Thanks Brian! Honoured with your kind commendation! Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2020 6:31:00 AM Oh no! A bit of a stinker...lol. Congratulations! Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 7:03:00 AM Thanks Kim! A different route to her heart!

Paul Callus Date: 8/29/2020 5:30:00 AM Lol What an unusual route this ring took to arrive on the bride's finger, Krish!:) Congratulation son your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 5:59:00 AM Thanks Paul! The enteral route of eternal bond! Kind regards!:)

Carol Mitra Date: 8/29/2020 5:22:00 AM Nice write....Congrats Kris on your win. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 5:24:00 AM Thanks Carol! Pleased you like it!

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/29/2020 5:10:00 AM Nice take on the theme. Thanks for your comment on my poem. You may look up my reply. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 5:23:00 AM Thanks Subimal! Really like your Monoku!

Line Gauthier Date: 8/29/2020 4:35:00 AM Well spun, Krish. Congrats ~ Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 5:23:00 AM Thanks Line! Much appreciate your kind words!

Howard Kerr Date: 8/29/2020 4:30:00 AM Hello Krish, Well done and well written. Congratulations. Howard Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 5:24:00 AM Thanks Howard! Very kind!

Silent One Date: 8/29/2020 2:51:00 AM Oh dear!!! Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 AM Thanks for this contest. Mine was a last minute entry and glad I did! Grateful for your encouragement through your contests! They generate some wonderful poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/27/2020 10:11:00 AM - ... omg. swallowed the ring ... maybe it will not come tomorrow :))) - A good one, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/27/2020 10:13:00 AM Thanks Anne-Lise!! Happens when one is anxious!!:)