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Paradise Lost Again

PARADISE LOST AGAIN I’ll write an epic, I resolved, In the style of Milton or Ovid. Then thought of all the work involved, And decided I couldn’t be bovid 17th August 2021 Your best four line light verse poetry contest Sponsor - L Milton Haskins

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/25/2021 1:24:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for the chuckle it has created. God bless you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2021 12:20:00 PM

I knew this would be on the winners list, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 8/23/2021 11:38:00 AM

Like Milt, I loved ‘bovid’. Made me grin, Bryn. Congrats on your win. Terry [the apparent poetry herein was entirely coincidental ;-) ]

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/23/2021 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Bryn. I loved the "bovid" ending! Perfect!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2021 3:22:00 PM

what fun rhyme I had to smile at 'bovid; good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx