Bryn Strudwick Poet Light Verse

Paradise Lost Again

PARADISE LOST AGAIN

I’ll write an epic, I resolved,
In the style of Milton or Ovid.
Then thought of all the work involved,
And decided I couldn’t be bovid

17th August 2021
Your best four line light verse poetry contest
Sponsor - L Milton Haskins

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Beata Agustin August 25, 2021 at 1:24 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for the chuckle it has created. God bless you.

Jan Allison August 23, 2021 at 12:20 PM I knew this would be on the winners list, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood August 23, 2021 at 11:38 AM Like Milt, I loved ‘bovid’. Made me grin, Bryn. Congrats on your win. Terry [the apparent poetry herein was entirely coincidental ;-) ]

L Milton Hankins August 23, 2021 at 9:42 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Bryn. I loved the "bovid" ending! Perfect!

Jan Allison August 18, 2021 at 3:22 PM what fun rhyme I had to smile at 'bovid; good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx