Paradise Lost

World

To hide
Feel free

To smile
To cry 

Just to be

No one around
Just me and my thoughts

This is my paradise
But paradise is lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Richards Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:40 AM
So true...it is quite difficult to find this "paradise" in our hectic world, but when we do..........it is bliss !! Congratulations on a thoughtful poem!
A   Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Angelika, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Roberts Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:44 PM
awesome piece, congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:30 PM
I am reading some mighty fine poems on Brian's winners' list. Congratulations. you deserved a big win.
Johnson Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win, Angelika. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Angelika. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on your win Angelika
Grisetti Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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