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Paradise Island

PARADISE ISLANDS At the end of a double rainbow ~ golden sands ~ Hawaiian sands ~ beside ~ azure waters My plaited lei roars ~ toward ~ ~ Lover’s footprints ~ on sandy shore Waikiki my ~ happily ever after ~ dream ~ Haku mele ~ strums upon ukulele Coconut tans and bare feet ~ embrace ~ Oahu ~ the gathering place ~ sunrise to sunset Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Darren White

Date: 4/12/2017 3:39:00 AM

That is absolutely wonderful, not just the poem, but how you shaped it too. Great poem, Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2017 7:23:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/11/2017 9:30:00 PM

Ooh Kim, I got the feeling. : ) Was on Kauai in 2010, so beautiful... "My plaited lei roars" = love it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2017 11:41:00 PM

Thank you, Doug! :)

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/11/2017 2:05:00 PM

Take me with you when you go Kim, lol, my dream vacation too. Nice write.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2017 2:09:00 PM

I lived there for 3 years when I was in the Navy! Want to go back sometime! It is paradise, my friend! I hope you get there. Alaska too! Colder though...lol