Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Paradise Found

Walk with me into a paradise...
Up steps to where hearts shall rise...

Rhyming letters and strumming tunes... 
Flowing dreams like floating balloons...

Floors of love with untouched peace...
Where a poets world could drip with ease...

Take a ride on this Ark of dreams...
Over land to sea we connect like streams...




inspired by Sukmawati Komala's dreams..
now my dreams too..

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Poet Destroyer A December 8, 2012 at 10:55 PM yes I am.... and why aren't you asleep... zzzzzzzzzzzzz ...LOL...pd

Dinda Minardi October 27, 2012 at 9:21 AM Yes, who would've thought that paradise is on our lover's eyes :)

Joe Maverick October 16, 2012 at 2:29 PM Well done here Michael, I think those dreams have done the best inspiration possible..!

Carol Eastman October 16, 2012 at 2:10 PM Great imagery and journey... You are obviously a very gifted writer. All of your poems I've read today say it...

Poet Destroyer A October 8, 2012 at 9:48 PM Michael, your poem is amazing, i love the walk, this poem lit up everything inside of me. I guess i do come with light. I love your bottom couplets, it is a very clever line. I have to say one of your best lines, and images. Extremly amazing... xox~pd

The Situation September 23, 2012 at 4:08 PM they are the best dreams

Debbie Guzzi September 23, 2012 at 11:33 AM full of lovely metaphors! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2012 at 9:06 AM such beautiful words to dwell on Michael luv ..dreams r so precious and real to those of us who believe in them .. always a treasure to read your lines luv .. JG in Nana mode as new grandson arrived yesterday .. xoxo .but I feel not one minute older ..haha..

Joann Grisetti September 22, 2012 at 5:16 PM I like your ark of dreams. And Yasmin's comment is almost a poem in itself. Michael J. Falotico September 22, 2012 at 5:43 PM Joann~ Yassssss is to kind. xxx

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2012 at 1:30 PM It really is beautiful like a dream, Michael. Way to get inspired!!

Russell Sivey September 22, 2012 at 6:43 AM I just love the line, "Where a poets world could drip with ease..." it says so much with just one line! I enjoyed this poem so very much Michael it brought a huge smile to my face my friend! The whole write is phenomenal, I love it! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!