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Paradise Found

Walk with me into a paradise...
Up steps to where hearts shall rise...

Rhyming letters and strumming tunes... 
Flowing dreams like floating balloons...

Floors of love with untouched peace...
Where a poets world could drip with ease...

Take a ride on this Ark of dreams...
Over land to sea we connect like streams...




inspired by Sukmawati Komala's dreams..
now my dreams too..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/8/2012 10:55:00 PM yes I am.... and why aren't you asleep... zzzzzzzzzzzzz ...LOL...pd Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 10/27/2012 9:21:00 AM Yes, who would've thought that paradise is on our lover's eyes :) Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 10/16/2012 2:29:00 PM Well done here Michael, I think those dreams have done the best inspiration possible..! Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 10/16/2012 2:10:00 PM Great imagery and journey... You are obviously a very gifted writer. All of your poems I've read today say it... Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/8/2012 9:48:00 PM Michael, your poem is amazing, i love the walk, this poem lit up everything inside of me. I guess i do come with light. I love your bottom couplets, it is a very clever line. I have to say one of your best lines, and images. Extremly amazing... xox~pd Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 9/23/2012 4:08:00 PM they are the best dreams Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/23/2012 11:33:00 AM full of lovely metaphors! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/23/2012 9:06:00 AM such beautiful words to dwell on Michael luv ..dreams r so precious and real to those of us who believe in them .. always a treasure to read your lines luv .. JG in Nana mode as new grandson arrived yesterday .. xoxo .but I feel not one minute older ..haha.. Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 9/22/2012 5:16:00 PM I like your ark of dreams. And Yasmin's comment is almost a poem in itself. Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/22/2012 5:43:00 PM Joann~ Yassssss is to kind. xxx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2012 1:30:00 PM It really is beautiful like a dream, Michael. Way to get inspired!! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/22/2012 6:43:00 AM I just love the line, "Where a poets world could drip with ease..." it says so much with just one line! I enjoyed this poem so very much Michael it brought a huge smile to my face my friend! The whole write is phenomenal, I love it! Fabulous piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply