Paradise Found 1

Were I to swim to the edge of the sea,
what splendid scene should await for me?
Would there be a castle turned upside down,
with moat and garden where roses abound?

Would there be a nook with bread and mead,
and rare leather-bound books for me to read?
Could I uncover secrets of the crown,
win a place at the fabled table round?

A lustrous lounge sitting next to a tree
with Merlin’s magic to envelope me.
A gnarly gantelope to test my firm ground,
unfailing doughty staunch, and silent sound.

If such distant place exists pure and free
I would swim away from my life and flee,
join with Arthurian knights all around
take up arms to protect the King renown.

My life, my honor, my blood I would bleed,
a place in history for noble deed.
A world of righteous and virtue bound,
confident and sure of paradise found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 8:01 PM
Hey, Linda: I think that Milton is a tad jealous. Really enjoyed this classicist write. Thanks, gw
Fowler Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 5:02 AM
Thanks very much gw. :) I enjoyed writing this one, and one soon to follow. ;) Thanks for stopping by! Linda
Leffanta Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 11:09 AM
Enjoyed! This is a well-written account of many a young-girl's daydreams! Aloha!
Fowler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Thanks Rico! We mature girls still have dreams as well :)) Thanks for stopping by! Linda
Romios Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Great writing, Linda! What a talent you are! Panagiota XXX
Fowler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 10:37 AM
You are such a good friend Pangie. Thank you for the visit and sweet comments! Linda
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 8:09 AM
It's lovely to just close our eyes sometimes in a quiet place and let our imagination take us to wherever we want to go. An enjoyable read Linda. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Fowler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Hello Tom. The week is going well, just too quickly. :) Thanks so much for the visit and calming words. Think I'll go there now. ;) Linda
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