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Paradise Fantasy

Full moon haunts the evening sky, Balmy weather perfect for you and I. Palm trees sway gently in the breeze, A night created for us to seize. You take my hand, bring it to your lips, And place on it the sweetest kiss. Hand in hand we stroll along, Listening to the seas night song. We run from waves as the tide comes in, Giggling and feeling like kids again. You playfully try to get me wet, I pretend to pout and be upset. Then, pulled into your warm embrace, My smitten heart begins to race. You gently kiss me once, then twice, Under a lover's moon in paradise. For now there's only you and I, Under a canopy of starlit sky; White sand beach beneath our feet, Held in thrall by love so sweet. Too soon the night gives way to dawn. I open sleepy eyes and you are gone. I sigh, but then I start to smile. Tonight we'll meet again on our paradise isle. 3/14/12 by Kim Merryman Entered in PD's Best Love Poem contest.

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Date: 4/2/2013 5:40:00 AM
Paradise definitely. Hope it's based on fact, it reads as if it might be. A lovely poem, Kim, well worth its win. Congratulations. - Red
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:12:00 PM
this one so deserved a big win. congrats again with your love poem!
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Date: 4/1/2013 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Kim....wonderful....Donna.
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Date: 4/1/2013 7:21:00 AM
Oh wow, Kim. Excellent...and I just love the way you ended it! Congrats!
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:38:00 PM
Simply beautiful, many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:05:00 AM
Congrats, Kim. Beautiful write. Well done. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:50:00 PM
Kim, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2012 4:33:00 PM
great rating too, deserving the accolade ... love it mate....
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2012 10:14:00 AM
Simply dreamy and delightful making this Highlander wish he was there. Most deserved of it's win in the contest Kim. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:26:00 AM
awesome write.congrats on the top placement.........~sashi
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:12:00 AM
A romantic write from you Kim.Congrats on your big win.
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Date: 3/16/2012 11:20:00 PM
Hey, it looks like I missed this one, Kim! BIG congrats in LInda's contest. A very much deserved win!!
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:44:00 PM
congrats Kim on a fab first place win for this tropical treasure luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:52:00 PM
Oh lala right out of a bodice ripper! ;)Congrads Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2012 4:43:00 PM
the happy heart romantic still, the wonderment remains a thrill...well done..
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:18:00 AM
Smashing Kim congratulations xx
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:02:00 AM
Wow!! Kim, you've so beautifully described their sweet love on that tropical balmy land. Congrats on your spectacular win in this contest.. and many thanks dear for your kind comments on my work. love you, gautami
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Date: 3/14/2012 2:36:00 PM
Yes, this is really romantic Kim, romance in moonlight....sweet. Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/14/2012 11:14:00 AM
Wonderful paradise scene displayed. Beautiful, Kim. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:09:00 AM
A pleasant dream for you, indeed...and nicely written, too.
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