Paradise Awaits

Spirits are summoned Souls awakened by freedom Soar to the heavens The Lord requests your presence Paradise now awaits you Chiquita Baity Contest Name Bald Eagle in Cemetery Contest Sponsor Carolyn Devonshire

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/21/2011 2:53:00 AM

Paradise eh? What religion if I may?...Total IRONIC NOTE HERE: I chose this poem to read and respond to your GOLIATH Question: and that poem just so happens to be one I wrote for a Carolyn Devonshire Picture Contest a long time ago! FUNNY huh? Weird. It was a picture of a grouper fish underwater named goliath! I wrote: And Goliath Said You can get with my group or you can get with another but I suggest you join the Grouper group or I’ll eat you and your mother!-Cheesy,but okSOUPmail 4u

Peter Adelakun

Date: 9/4/2011 3:59:00 PM

Hello Baity! It's good to know that Paradise awaits us all! Thanks for sharing. I wish to know you more!

James Peranteau

Date: 8/12/2011 12:29:00 PM

Chiquita, I just love that you are consistant and vibrant with the forms you are using dear poet ! One thing that inspires me to read, and follow a poet here on the 'Soup'; is the homogeny when writing poetry. Titles and forms increases the , not only perfect flow of a write, yet, the intensity of its message ! Well done Chiquita, well done ! Much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/10/2011 10:21:00 AM

Wonderful take and read on the picture of the contest, Chiquita

Don Johnson

Date: 8/10/2011 4:59:00 AM

spiritual is the realm of poetry, spirit rules behind the veil, great spirit one God emotes to ye, put it out it's yours don't fail... one thing brought another, love it, Don

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/9/2011 11:51:00 PM

Really nice write. Very free and holly thoughts. Enjoyed it as you penned it well. Thanks.bl