Paradise

Paradise

When I look
at how the world is...
that, 
it's broken 
beyond repair...

and, 
it comforts me 
just knowing...
that you exist, 
and that you care

Even though, 
some people laugh and doubt...
they don't even know 
what you're about...

In the end,
they'll know 
just who you are

Chorus
Paradise...
I can feel, 
your love surround me
Paradise...
I'm so glad, 
your truth has found me
Paradise...
because of faith in you, 
I have survived...
to see, Paradise...
this evil world has passed away
and so I  praise your holy name 
every day

I look around, 
there's no more 
strangers...
every one 
has a friendly smile...

I'm convinced, 
now more than ever...
that serving you, 
was so worthwhile

Now, 
I see the whole world 
is at peace
all of your enemies 
deceased...
Finally, 
all anxieties released

Chorus
Paradise...
I can feel, 
your love surround me...
Paradise...
I'm so glad, 
your truth has found me...
Paradise...
because of faith in you, 
I have survived...
to see Paradise...
this evil world 
has passed away
and so I  praise, 
your holy name every day

repeat chorus
fade to zero

John Derek Hamilton
July 25,2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Oh how beautiful John. Sometimes in our busy lives it's important to seek solace and a peaceful moment to help renew our spirit so we may continue on. Your soulful lyrics do exactly that. thank you xo
Hamilton Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:21 PM
Thanks Lynn Marie I'm so glad you liked this one it does give me hope as well
Loepppky Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:21 PM
Very well written, my son. I agree whole heartily.Can't wait till all this is over,& we r in that beautiful paradise earth. I like the way u said ON EARTH.
Hamilton Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Thanks Mom, glad you liked it, it is very encouraging for sure, just a little while longer...
Hoffman Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Absolutely beautiful lyric/poem about Heaven John; I think many of us believers are looking forward to it one day~Che :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Some look forward to a heavenly paradise, it's true, but just imagine when the earth is restored to paradise, and like Jesus said in the Lord's prayer, Let your will be done ON EARTH as it is in heaven, what a glorious day that will be! Thanks for your nice visit and comment!
Hsi Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 12:12 PM
I'd love to be in Paradise. Thank you for writing a very nice lyric about this wonderful place.
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Thanks Thomas, we can all be there, it's the future for all who choose it!
Sands Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 11:33 AM
You did it again , John! Another beautiful, meaningful lyric and a favorite :) Very comforting.
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thanks Heidi, glad you enjoyed it, thanks especially for the fave. We all need comfort especially in these difficult times!
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 11:33 AM
A very enjoyable hymn John
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Thanks a lot Tim for the visit and nice comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it, we all need hope especially now!
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