Paradise

His heart awakens 
Eyes taken 
In a soft gaze upon the moon 
Had he been mistaken? 
To find such beauty 
Within divine love so true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:40 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 11:11 PM
To the point, good job. Charlie
Fauteux Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Simply and beautiful. Wonderful job :)
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