Paradise

Philosophical concept.....NO!
Attaining a higher precept; lets go.
Rich and free no worries,
Able to rest for real.
Doing those things that bring peace;
It gives me so much appeal.
Staying there, not having to leave,
Eternal in time and now I can breathe!



December 21, 2015
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Petersen Potter Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Very nice Acrostic Daisy! I sure liked it!:) A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you!:) D.
Gentry Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:45 PM
Delightful acrostic. Good luck in the contest!
Yant Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Susan. Much Love
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