Paradise

Placid haven between the mountains

Accentuate the idilic romance between

Romantic couple who was enjoying

Anniversary celebration for the ten

Days of a second honeymoon

Inspired by the sacred vows

Solemnly pledged with an amorous 

Enchantment for an eternal lifetime


For Paradise Acrostic Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Ninth Place
12-21-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 28, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Nayda, a very nice win. SKAT
A   Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 4:25 AM
Nayda, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Thank you very much Linda.
Cheema Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 3:27 AM
Love the haven idea for a honeymoon! Congrats on your win Nayda!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Thank you very much Balveen.
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Paradise for them, Nayda. Lovely and romantic. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Thank you very much Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:27 PM
a nice little story told in your acrostic about his couple, Nayda. Congrats on the winners' list.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.
Scars Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Nayda, congrats on your placement in the contest! a VERY BEAUTIFUL write!! -luloo -*smiles*
Negron Flores Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Thank you ver y much Laura.
Tor Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:18 AM
What a loving theme Nayda congratulations on your win!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Thank you very much Michael.
Hamilton Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Thanks Nayda was a very good effort at a difficult acrostic. I appreciated the concept of it!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thank you very much John. It challenged my mind. An honour for me to participate in the contest.
Whatley Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Very profound and meaningful, a pleasure to picture in mind.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Thank you very much Michael. Thanks for visiting my poem.
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