Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Acrostic

Paradise

Pampered like a child, Lord, your grace
Abounds in my heart; and on my face
Reverence for you beams with gratitude
Affording me with a humble attitude
Demonstrating your eternal blessing
Imbuing in me a warm ethereal feeling 
Soliciting solace and heavenly happiness
Eliminating my worldly woes and stress.


~12/20/2015
~Paradise Acrostic contest by John Hamilton

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:15 PM Abdul, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:17 AM Abdul, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 28, 2015 at 1:54 AM Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Abdul.. congrats on big win!

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 5:59 PM CONGRATS ON YOUR FINE WIN!!!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:05 PM well done, Abdul. Glad to see this lovely poem high on the winners' list and BIG congrats to you.

Sandra Haight December 27, 2015 at 8:56 AM So beautifully written, Abdul. A real, deeper meaning of paradise. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra Abdul Malik Mandani December 27, 2015 at 11:16 AM Thanks Sandra, appreciate your comments very much.

Susan Gentry December 27, 2015 at 7:52 AM Congratulations on winning 2nd place in the Paradise contest! Abdul Malik Mandani December 27, 2015 at 11:17 AM Thanks Susan.

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 2:46 AM Congratulations on this merited top placement, Abdul. A very lovely poetic offering! ~ All the best. // paul Abdul Malik Mandani December 27, 2015 at 11:18 AM Thanks Paul, glad you like it.

John Hamilton December 26, 2015 at 11:38 PM Congratulations Abdul on your excellent poem 37/40. Thank you for posting this! Abdul Malik Mandani December 27, 2015 at 11:20 AM Glad you liked it. Thanks John.