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Paradise

Pampered like a child, Lord, your grace Abounds in my heart; and on my face Reverence for you beams with gratitude Affording me with a humble attitude Demonstrating your eternal blessing Imbuing in me a warm ethereal feeling Soliciting solace and heavenly happiness Eliminating my worldly woes and stress. ~12/20/2015 ~Paradise Acrostic contest by John Hamilton

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Date: 12/28/2015 10:15:00 PM
Abdul, a very nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:17:00 AM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 1:54:00 AM
Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Abdul.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/27/2015 5:59:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR FINE WIN!!!
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:05:00 PM
well done, Abdul. Glad to see this lovely poem high on the winners' list and BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 12/27/2015 8:56:00 AM
So beautifully written, Abdul. A real, deeper meaning of paradise. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/27/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, appreciate your comments very much.
Date: 12/27/2015 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on winning 2nd place in the Paradise contest!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/27/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 12/27/2015 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on this merited top placement, Abdul. A very lovely poetic offering! ~ All the best. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/27/2015 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Paul, glad you like it.
Date: 12/26/2015 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations Abdul on your excellent poem 37/40. Thank you for posting this!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/27/2015 11:20:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks John.

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