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Paradise

Desert island dreams.
   Wind and surf with golden sands.
   Sunshine steals my heart.
   Paradise begins to wane.
   Hell on Earth shipwrecked alone


       3/ 30/ 2015..

Copyright © George Seal | Year Posted 2015

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March 30, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Very bold imagery...nice job. I enjoyed your poem.

April 8, 2015 at 4:04 AM

Hello John, thankyou so much for reading my poem i do appreciate your comments. My kindest regards to you. George.

March 30, 2015 at 3:08 PM

Lovely tanka George - such vivid imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx

April 8, 2015 at 3:59 AM

Thankyou Jan, so glad that you enjoyed it and a very nice comment also. Cheers George.

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