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Paradise

Desert island dreams. Wind and surf with golden sands. Sunshine steals my heart. Paradise begins to wane. Hell on Earth shipwrecked alone 3/ 30/ 2015..

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Date: 3/30/2015 11:45:00 PM
Very bold imagery...nice job. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 4/8/2015 4:04:00 AM
Hello John, thankyou so much for reading my poem i do appreciate your comments. My kindest regards to you. George.
Date: 3/30/2015 3:08:00 PM
Lovely tanka George - such vivid imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2015 3:59:00 AM
Thankyou Jan, so glad that you enjoyed it and a very nice comment also. Cheers George.

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