Paradise

do you remember me
when we are apart
how you took my hand
then stole my heart
under the moon
by the whispering sea
that first time you said
that you loved me

do you remember
when we are apart
how paradise feels
or have you forgot
am I there in your day
or just in your dreams
did you mean what you said
that you loved me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 10, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Dreamy piece JB, a lovely read >> James
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January 10, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Beautiful and lovely write. First four lines are very lovely. I have posted a new love poem The Boatman's Song. Hope you would like the love story. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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