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Paradise

do you remember me when we are apart how you took my hand then stole my heart under the moon by the whispering sea that first time you said that you loved me do you remember when we are apart how paradise feels or have you forgot am I there in your day or just in your dreams did you mean what you said that you loved me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/10/2010 6:54:00 AM
Dreamy piece JB, a lovely read >> James
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Date: 1/10/2010 5:33:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely write. First four lines are very lovely. I have posted a new love poem The Boatman's Song. Hope you would like the love story. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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