Parachute of Understanding

If the parachute of understanding doesn't open in time, Man into the abyss of oblivion will vanish!











(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
           31 May 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 3:34 PM
And many are falling in that abyss, even now!!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:00 AM
The danger is that all humanity falls because of the unending mistakes it makes! Thank you Andrea for your kind visit and comment!
Manassian Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Yes, my dear esteemed poet. Some are not gifted with this parachute. ;) Hugs to you
Trifiatis Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:02 AM
True, and these people exhilarate the fall of the rest as well! Thank you dear, Eileen for your love and support!
Meade Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:44 AM
The panic of a free fall, and the jerk up on the strings of life! I have missed reading your wisdom my friend. Much Love and Understanding.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 8:04 AM
A very fitting comment that analyses in detail the writing! Thank you my friend, David for visiting again!
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:44 AM
- A really wonderful thoughtful line, my friend Demetrios - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise for your lovely visit and beautiful comment!
Smith Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Fabulous my friend. I love it.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Timotheos, for your precious visit and comment!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:10 AM
This is very good!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thank you, Richard! Very kind of you to visit!
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