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paperplane

                white wing wobbles fast
                             on windowpane it  bumps
                   childhood dreams take flight

childdreamhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2026 at 4:40 PM

This is so cute! Thanks for my recent contest placement while I am here. It's nice you are doing a new cat contest!

Valsa George

June 22, 2026 at 9:54 PM

I can so well relate to this experience. As children, most of us have made paper planes. A lovely haiku. All the best, dear Jez.

Moon Harp

June 11, 2026 at 7:08 AM

JC, I like the way you combined purple with white to produce lilac. And, of course, the pictogram of kite is cool. This is a wonderful haiku. Moon Harp