Paper Plane

Paper airplane flies
Landing in fortunate place
Summer winds of change
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 7, 2016 at 1:02 PM
edwin, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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September 20, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Hi Edwin, I love this wonderful haiku! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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September 18, 2014 at 1:02 PM
It takes talent to hold together a haiku.... You have broken the code, my friend.... welcome to PSoup..... Regards..... Jake
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September 18, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Edwin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 18, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Edwin - I choose your first great written haiku ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 18, 2014 at 1:45 AM
Pleasing scene created, Edwin
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