Paper Cell

"Give me more", my hunger rages, 8 
Write the rhymes and rip the pages. 8 

Leave the rhythm, change the rhyme, 7 
But wait, a syl-label was lost. 8 
I think the comma helped this time. 8 
And hyphens are a petty cost. 8 

Now change the rhythm, but keep with the rhyme. 10 
The line was sped, so not much lost. 8 
I'll have to bring it back this time; 8 
It seems the rhythm's shown its cost. 8 

Worth was the word that I wanted to use. 10 
I forced the rhyme, went back to ten. 8 
Then broke my knees to beg the muse, 8 
And made it back to eight again. 8 

Oh muse, thou hast forsaken me, 8 
Resorting to archaic words. 8 
Perhaps cliche will set me free; 8 
I'll write of love and trees and birds. 8 

Or maybe I should write of death, 8 
A noble knight that bravely fell. 8 
Put wisdom in his final breath, 8 
Like pennies in a wishing well. 8 

I'm trapped inside this paper cell, 8 
My self-created poet's hell. 8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Heckman Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 7:46 PM
Very funny... you must be a musician as well as a poet! Julie
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March 24, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Timothy. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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