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PAPER BOATS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ paper boats float by, drifting on a summer breeze— clouds above me dance, sails of white against the blue, who sends them racing with me?

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Date: 8/11/2025 10:10:00 AM
- Remembering when we made paper boats as kids... lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/11/2025 5:20:00 PM
thank you, Anne-Lise. I saw an old picture of my brother and I floating paper boats as kids...the creative nudge for this poem. hugs, Sara
Date: 8/11/2025 9:49:00 AM
Who indeed? Nice verse.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/11/2025 5:21:00 PM
thank you, Chetta, for stopping by and for your upbeat comment...enjoy your evening, Sara

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