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Paparazzi In the Garden

worries far above
        the coneflower canopy —
             cameras whizz by
with two-legged mammals
 searching for faerie wings



11/14/2019

fairytanka

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Gershon Wolf

November 17, 2019 at 9:43 PM

Love those 'two-legged mammals...searching for wings!' … Really look forward to your tankas now, Kim! Cheers, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2019 at 9:44 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon!

Eve Roper

November 16, 2019 at 10:34 PM

you've made the Tanka like a Haiku lovely.

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2019 at 7:32 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 16, 2019 at 9:03 PM

Enchanting imagery in this sweet Tanka Kim! I can visualize the colors. xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2019 at 9:26 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Silent One

November 16, 2019 at 11:57 AM

Great tanka with great choice of words and vivid imagery .

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2019 at 9:25 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Kurt Ravidas

November 15, 2019 at 4:06 PM

The perfect tanka with internal rhymes and zzizzing. I did enjoy reading. Bravo, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2019 at 6:58 AM

Thank you, Kurt! :)

Caren Krutsinger

November 15, 2019 at 1:59 PM

Beautifully done! I am smiling at this.

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2019 at 2:01 PM

Thought you might like :) So glad you do!

Chris Green

November 15, 2019 at 9:30 AM

Makes me think of the fairy photo that Conan Doyle was duped with. Nicely done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2019 at 9:30 AM

LOL! Thanks :)

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