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Paparazzi In the Garden

worries far above the coneflower canopy — cameras whizz by with two-legged mammals searching for faerie wings 11/14/2019

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Date: 11/17/2019 9:43:00 PM
Love those 'two-legged mammals...searching for wings!' … Really look forward to your tankas now, Kim! Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2019 9:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 11/16/2019 10:34:00 PM
you've made the Tanka like a Haiku lovely.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/16/2019 9:03:00 PM
Enchanting imagery in this sweet Tanka Kim! I can visualize the colors. xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2019 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 11/16/2019 11:57:00 AM
Great tanka with great choice of words and vivid imagery .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/15/2019 4:06:00 PM
The perfect tanka with internal rhymes and zzizzing. I did enjoy reading. Bravo, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt! :)
Date: 11/15/2019 1:59:00 PM
Beautifully done! I am smiling at this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thought you might like :) So glad you do!
Date: 11/15/2019 9:30:00 AM
Makes me think of the fairy photo that Conan Doyle was duped with. Nicely done Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 9:30:00 AM
LOL! Thanks :)

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