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An experiment using titles from opera and musicals in a pantoum poem.

Go now heartless one, its a time to say goodbye. Together we danced to the music of the night, but now the sound of music brings tears to the eye. I could have danced all night, forever held you tight. Together we danced to the music of the night. I dreamed a dream where you said to my heart "I do." I could have danced all night, forever held you tight. Now any dream will do that does not include you. I dreamed a dream where you said to my heart "I do," You said: "Its an impossible dream, forget those." Now any dream will do that does not include you. In time, each memory dies like a wilted rose. You said: "Its an impossible dream, forget those." Said: "If ever I would leave you, not to be sad." In time, each memory dies like a wilted rose, as seasons of love balance between good and bad. Said: "If ever I would leave you, not to be sad; your soul was born defying gravity - be strong." As seasons of love balance between good and bad, my heart believes somewhere someone sings my soul's song. Your soul was born defying gravity - be strong, but now the sound of music brings tears to the eye. My heart believes somewhere someone sings my soul's song. Go now heartless one, its a time to say goodbye.
Silent One 9 October 2017 A pantoum poem, consisting of 12 syllables per line. The poem has 12 titles taken from Opera and musicals. A time to say goodbye by Andrea Bocelli and Sarah Brightman Music of the night from Phantom of the opera The sound of music from the sound of music I could have danced all night from My fair lady I dreamed a dream from Les Miserables Any dream will do from Jason and the amazing technicolor dream coat The Impossible dream from Man Of La Mancha Memory from CATS If ever I would leave you from Camelot Seasons of love from Rent Defying gravity from Wicked Somewhere from West Side Story

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Date: 12/21/2017 12:11:00 PM
Vert enjoyable to read but too difficult for a writer like myself to even try! Congratulations, Silent One. And many thanks for taking the time to read my work, much appreciated. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Date: 10/24/2017 1:12:00 PM
I have enjoyed this so much that i went to see 3 times, and still enjoyed it like I have seen it for the first time. I have enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:59:00 PM
I enjoyed the pantoum when i first saw it, but now I'd rather get it straight to the point. However, the way you inserted the famous quotes is brilliant!
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:47:00 PM
A beautiful master piece. The emotions run through each orchestrated verse. Very clever. Enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 10/13/2017 11:43:00 AM
I bow to the master, all has been said. You are a wizard!
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Date: 10/13/2017 12:53:00 AM
Creativeness on this write is clearly seen and thus by far the most quintessential piece I've ever read today.
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Date: 10/12/2017 11:41:00 AM
Tremendous effort shown here Silent One. Very well thought of and orchestrated.
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Date: 10/11/2017 4:42:00 AM
Very well done, creative and clever, Silent One :)
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:45:00 AM
Excellent Pantoum. Very creative write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:43:00 PM
A lovely Pantoum, and quite creative, too. I can see the planning that went into it. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/10/2017 10:11:00 AM
Another masterpiece and I am enjoying each one, SO:)
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Date: 10/10/2017 7:49:00 AM
A masterpiece of a Pantoum poem, well researched and superbly written dear, S1! Bravo!
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Date: 10/10/2017 4:36:00 AM
Very nicely done Silent One...best wishes
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Date: 10/9/2017 7:35:00 PM
This was ingenious.....Phantom of The Opera is one of my favorites and incorporating it with the other musicals and opera titles and songs was perfect! Well done! Donna:-)
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Date: 10/9/2017 6:25:00 PM
Its just awesome.I loved the flow. Thank you for your advise, I'll now make a correction of my poem that I claim to be a Pantoum.
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Date: 10/9/2017 3:42:00 PM
written with much creative expression.. this is extraordinary, S.O...i am a broadway fanatic!... huggs
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:21:00 PM
This is SO clever, Silent One. I really enjoyed it! A really great idea!
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Date: 10/9/2017 1:53:00 PM
- I do not know so much about opera or musicals ... but your poem is amazing, my friend S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2017 12:59:00 PM
Very cleverly done my man... you are truly a romantic at heart!!! I applaud you SO!!!
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Date: 10/9/2017 12:40:00 PM
Well done in one of the toughest forms, pretty darn good choice of music too...
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Date: 10/9/2017 11:52:00 AM
WOW!!! Magnificent!!!! I couldn't tell if it was a repeated line, it all belong together.. perfect flow, perfect rhyme, perfect syllable count... perfect theme... Outstanding....Silent One. I'm jealous . Thank you for the wonderful compliment on my poem,,, I wasn't to sure about it.. :) hugs dear friend ~`*
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Date: 10/9/2017 11:37:00 AM
Your Pantoum is especially beautiful and mesmerizing Silent One! Such a stunning theme with great use of the song titles (all songs that I adore) in your lovely lines that flow with effortless smoothness. Your intertwining of the repeated lines is masterful, so difficult to do. Love it and a fave my friend! Thank you for commenting on my Pantoum~ Susan
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Date: 10/9/2017 10:35:00 AM
!! Enjoyed your Pantoum. Pantoums can be challenging ...haven't written many but reading this inspires me to attempt to soon. Your choice of Operatic pieces is wonderful..Beautiful! Annalisa ~*~
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Date: 10/9/2017 7:35:00 AM
Amazing Pantoum Si, and to use these titles from all these musicals and Operas make it even more so. Very creative indeed..I've seen all these musicals except Rent.Have to say The Phantom of the Opera is still my favourite. You have certainly mastered this form....Maria
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Date: 10/9/2017 6:50:00 AM
An artful creation, quite engrossed in music and theater! A difficult write, so well done--many thank for sharing Silent One!
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