John-Ovan.P. Hull Poet Pantoum

Pantoum Menace

Reminisce the vows as you become my wife
Through eternal summers we dance and play
Amidst the boughs on the tree of life
True Loves remembrance on mid-summers day.

Through eternal summers we dance and play
We live so free we laugh so careless
True Loves remembrance on mid-summers day
You gift to me a joy to share this

We live so free we laugh so careless
When Love feels right deep inside
You gift to me a joy to share this
Your smiles I can't keep and hide.

When Love feels right so deep inside
My Love and desire for you never tires
Your smiles I can't keep to hide
Pandemonium rules as order gently retires

My Love and desire for you never tires
To feel you quiver under my touch
Pandemonium rules as order gently retires
And I shiver because I Love you so much.

To feel you quiver under my touch
Amidst the boughs on the tree of life
And I shiver because I Love you so much
Reminisce those vows when you became my wife. 

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Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 10:00 PM John-O, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 6, 2016 at 2:14 AM Congrats on a worthy win with this superb poem John..

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 5:05 PM beautifully romantic and i LOVE the clever title:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Red Fiery March 26, 2016 at 12:10 PM Are you going to trust me , if i say something? This is your best poem..i have read so many love poems and poems of other genre....but you justify Romance brilliantly...!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kudos to you for this and to the lady who inspired you...hugs Red John-Ovan.P. Hull March 26, 2016 at 8:01 PM Thankyou most graciously, that may well be my best ever comment to a piece of my work, big hugs right back at ya. Hopefully it does OK in the contest, though I'm not totally convinced on the cheap star wars rip off title? Xx