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Pantoum Menace

Reminisce the vows as you become my wife Through eternal summers we dance and play Amidst the boughs on the tree of life True Loves remembrance on mid-summers day. Through eternal summers we dance and play We live so free we laugh so careless True Loves remembrance on mid-summers day You gift to me a joy to share this We live so free we laugh so careless When Love feels right deep inside You gift to me a joy to share this Your smiles I can't keep and hide. When Love feels right so deep inside My Love and desire for you never tires Your smiles I can't keep to hide Pandemonium rules as order gently retires My Love and desire for you never tires To feel you quiver under my touch Pandemonium rules as order gently retires And I shiver because I Love you so much. To feel you quiver under my touch Amidst the boughs on the tree of life And I shiver because I Love you so much Reminisce those vows when you became my wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 10:00:00 PM
John-O, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:14:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb poem John..
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:05:00 PM
beautifully romantic and i LOVE the clever title:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/26/2016 12:10:00 PM
Are you going to trust me , if i say something? This is your best poem..i have read so many love poems and poems of other genre....but you justify Romance brilliantly...!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kudos to you for this and to the lady who inspired you...hugs Red
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John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 3/26/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thankyou most graciously, that may well be my best ever comment to a piece of my work, big hugs right back at ya. Hopefully it does OK in the contest, though I'm not totally convinced on the cheap star wars rip off title? Xx

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