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Pantoum From Your Jingles

Desire from the river Movements of the jingle Timeless calls of your smile Moons inside your soft voice Movements of the jingle On the light amber ankle Moons inside your soft voice Like the solitary poetry On the light amber ankle Sits the whisper of eons Like the solitary poetry Hearts in intense body Sits the whispers of eons In the overwhelmed wings Hearts in intense body In the enchanting ripples In the overwhelmed wings Timeless calls of your smile In the enchanting ripples Desire from the river October 2,2017

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Date: 10/6/2017 12:29:00 PM
I love this rhythmic free versed pantoum, Probir. It dances w/emotion and spiritually sways in unison w/nature. A joy to read, a delightful poetic treat for the eyes. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/6/2017 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend ... I am glad that you have enjoyed reading ...
Date: 10/3/2017 3:43:00 PM
Will have to look up pantoum. Is it like pandemonium? There are several Gupta's on Poetry Soup.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2017 6:26:00 PM
if it's a poem// or a pandemonium//a reader decides ... Thanks for the visit// James there many// so are Guptas most likely// don't you like this one ... it is not a must// that all pantoums will be rhymed// thank u so much James ...
Date: 10/3/2017 11:13:00 AM
A different pantoum with shorter lines, but still very good
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you ... am delighted ...
Date: 10/3/2017 7:55:00 AM
The flow of poetry's river transports the mind to the sea of inspiration my friend, Probir! Wonderfully done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/2/2017 8:21:00 AM
Lovely theme--well written and executed as always--best for a win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/4/2017 11:50:00 AM
Thank you ... Sorry ... I don't understand how it got left out ...

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