Pantoum From Your Jingles

Desire from the river
Movements of the jingle
Timeless calls of your smile
Moons inside your soft voice

Movements of the jingle
On the light amber ankle
Moons inside your soft voice
Like the solitary poetry

On the light amber ankle
Sits the whisper of eons
Like the solitary poetry
Hearts in intense body

Sits the whispers of eons
In the overwhelmed wings
Hearts in intense body
In the enchanting ripples

In the overwhelmed wings
Timeless calls of your smile
In the enchanting ripples
Desire from the river

October 2,2017
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 12:29 PM
I love this rhythmic free versed pantoum, Probir. It dances w/emotion and spiritually sways in unison w/nature. A joy to read, a delightful poetic treat for the eyes. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.
Gupta Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thank you, dear friend ... I am glad that you have enjoyed reading ...
Horn Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Will have to look up pantoum. Is it like pandemonium? There are several Gupta's on Poetry Soup.
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:26 PM
if it's a poem// or a pandemonium//a reader decides ... Thanks for the visit// James there many// so are Guptas most likely// don't you like this one ... it is not a must// that all pantoums will be rhymed// thank u so much James ...
One Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:13 AM
A different pantoum with shorter lines, but still very good
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thank you ... am delighted ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:55 AM
The flow of poetry's river transports the mind to the sea of inspiration my friend, Probir! Wonderfully done!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thank you ...
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Lovely theme--well written and executed as always--best for a win!
Gupta Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Thank you ... Sorry ... I don't understand how it got left out ...
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