Pantoum Beauty

She's a maze with no escape
I seem to be lost in her beauty;
Every twist or turn I take
It feels like an unending movie.

I seem to be lost in her beauty
She's such a breathtaking wonder;
It feels like an unending movie
All I can do, is surrender.

She's such a breathtaking wonder
Her beauty is not just physical;
All I can do, is surrender -
This girl feels almost mythical.

Her beauty is not just physical
Her loving-kindness ends all strife;
This girl feels almost mythical
I wish she's always in my life.

Her loving-kindness ends all strife
She's a maze with no escape;
I wish she's always in my life,
Every twist or turn I take.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Ahh!! Very romantic one. Thanks for sharing your love work with us. Sara K
Venkat Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Thank you so much
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