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Pantomime

mute ‘triloquist and talking mime went on a date for the first time he threw her voice under the bus you should have watched the way she cussed she shut him down with signs that hurt when slipped his hand beneath her shirt but then he gave her new white gloves and pantomimed undying love now she’s his doll he needs no strings unloosed his tongue and now he sings

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Date: 9/29/2022 7:45:00 PM
An interesting take and read well done sir
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 9/29/2022 8:09:00 PM
Thanks! A bit strange, admittedly, lol
Date: 5/6/2022 11:51:00 PM
Very clever Jeff. Actions spoke louder than words in your poem. :) Enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/6/2022 2:39:00 PM
What a blast, Jeff! So smartly penned! This is an absolute FAVE for me! Thanks, Gershon
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/6/2022 3:55:00 PM
glad you liked it! An initial version started out kinda bawdy at first, but I toned it down, and kinda like it too! :-)

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