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Panties

pink strings of elastic stretch before me as I pull them out of my panties are they there, are they plastic; I wonder as my waist line loosens I remember I am wearing underwear that has nothing to do with how easy they are to pull off or how easy it is for someone to think that they can reach in when it is impossible but yet I forget maybe I want to and maybe not yet

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Date: 6/7/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Faith, I was playing a lot with enjambment in this one.
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Date: 6/7/2019 11:46:00 AM
The lack of line breaks really works to your advantage in this short poem. The first "sentence" is particularly evocative because of the run of "my's". Good job!
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