Panther

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Poetic Form: Personification

Inspired: 2023 October 28

Image: Rare Black Panther Photo of Hannah Osborne by Newsweek

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An isolated silhouette grows amongst cowering greens as an aimless impression yonder trace mimicking lifeless postures. Outlines vanish from the capture as that raises a different outcome, yet the instinctive mingling seems to handily host its surroundings. An uncomfortable challenge awaits the undaunted souls whose remapping and charting of the intriguing stranger that disarms their unused weapons. A laid-out weave of strong fibers and the jungle gifts neatly covers it as a large freshly killed Peccary lies in the middle. Woosh! Snarls the elusive one!

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 8:38:00 AM

Thats actually one of my favorite quotes by shakespeare. And moving onto your personification, this is so very well written! I absolutely love the flow and depth of your poem. I just posted a personification too and yours about black jaguars is so very creative. I especially love your opening lines, they truly drew me in, and gave an idea of the poetic ambience youve depicted with jungle gifts and how they host their surroundings! Profound! Brilliant write! Pleasure reading this!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2023 9:08:00 AM

Ah, Ink Empress! My second choice for a quote was "Potato, potahto," by the Gershwin Brothers. The irrelevancy of Google humoring me in the variousness of the animal yond panther. Whatever the legitimacy, nonetheless, the stealth beast that dons a natural camouflage was intriguing enough for me. I always enjoy your uplifting expressions, my friend! Aloha, William