Panic Attack Express

Encroached by bleakness barren thoughts derail,
lost zephyr junction-bound now frozen still,
whose screams for help are made to no avail,
as panic railroads bits where nightmares drill;

Safe harbors flee when tidal waves attack,
stirred quick from fossils steamed in hellish heat;
An anxious cabin falters off its track,
then leaps to scorched black coal with naked feet;

A locomotive chugging cellophane,
inhales as hostage held in hollow night;
In prior moments rolled civilian sane,
Until the devil came and fight took flight.

Unknown are reasons engines suffocate,
But cargo spilled produces heavy weight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 7, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Really nicely done. The rhyme scheme was spot on. The theme was dark and frustrating but in a very good way. I know people who have experienced these and I can tell you, it's not a ride I want to tag along on.
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October 7, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Thank you - the descriptions I read about them were horrific, I think it's one of those things you'd have to experience first hand to truly understand. I'm blessed not to have but I feel a lot more now for folks who have. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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October 7, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Wow, you really chugged along with the themed course here, I've never had one, it's an express flight I hope I never do, but this made me feel as though I exactly knew the pressure.
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October 7, 2016 at 8:47 AM
I hear they're pretty messed up. I've never had one either and I don't want one. It'd be a trainwreck
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