Panic

One thought scattered, this time, this scattered thought won.

Two moments in I found it, found I, in moments too.

Four ideas, these are what here, what are these ideas for?

Eight breaths taken, while waiting for calm, for waiting while taken, breaths ate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2010 at 6:50 AM
this is definitly panic maybe some confusion good write i like it, i really like the roll of your togue poems. =)
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