Pangs

I felt a pang of sweet remembered love
when I went back to places of the past
Forbidden fruit, strong chemistry, a lock to leave and lose the key

I felt the loss, keen, engraved
when I heard your funeral was soon
I’d spoken to you - hear your voice right now
Silenced till the end of time
I’ll add the echoes to my album
of all the friends and others I have known
now gone

This is a vale of tears
it can’t go on too long
The books will fill, the bells will toll, the earth grow tired of blood and toil
the years will cease, the time be gone
and every name be called to come
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 19, 2016 at 12:47 AM
That's a heavy write, I think you did well on the metaphors. SKAT
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March 18, 2016 at 6:10 PM
This is a deep write... Linda
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