Pandorax Box

***BEWARE***

I saw the eyes as they called for me,
I felt the nearness as she
Smiled at me,
With undying love for passionate bliss.
Carried away by the moonlight in her eyes,
"another Adam to me you are"
She whispered quietly in my listening ears,
As she drew me to her sweating, swollen,
Crystal chest..."Eve?" my conscience 
Asked me within, yet overwhelmed by 
Her milky fleshy lips... i ignored my conscience.   
Now am deep deeper in, deepest in 
Her adamant capturing Eden....
I ate her candy, really sweet and spicy,
But am no more the best among the rest.
The Eve has slacken me to a slave,
Am no more brave,
Am starting from the cradle,
Oh! my conscience...
"where are thou? 
For in this hole, i hardly see the light".




FOR JOHN HECK'S POETRY CONTEST
(JADED PARTITIONS).





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FOR EVERY SHE AND EVERY HE, SHINE YOUR EYES, BEFORE
YOU BITE THE APPLE.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Wisdoms after the fact. Thanks for sharing this story. It game me insight into men...they make loving mistakes, too. Great writing.
Devonshire Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Once you sample the candy, it's hard to live without it, son. This is an excellent entry for John's contest and you know your mum is pulling for you to win! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 4:35 AM
well written poem.... you have much talent.
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 9:24 PM
IT sounds like she was a great temptress, Charles. AWEsome last line! Luv, Andrea
Loving Iii Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 2:32 PM
good work. deep subject and truth. john h loving iii
Babcock Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 12:48 PM
That is wise words to shine your eyes before you bite the apple. I think this is a wonderful poem for the contest and good luck . Love mom
Sweetheart Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Wise words of advice from u Lightening Ink .. today .. with this breathtaking piece.. if for the new contest by John.. good luck my friend.. an awesome competitor for sure..with luv...
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