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Pandemonium

P anic stations in Labour Ward A fter the doctor cut the cord. N urse noticed Mum's tum D ecidedly distended still. E mergency equipment M ust be found, as it's O bvious after listening in, N urse has heard a second twin. I n case this baby need O2, U rgently once it's born. M y..what a busy morn! 20/11/2017 For Silent One's HERO contest.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/9/2017 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jean - well-done, my friend! :-) <3

Jean Murray
Date: 12/9/2017 5:27:00 PM

Always lovely to see you seeing me Greg. Thank you.

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/4/2017 4:38:00 AM

Obviously autobiographical, Jean, you hero. I can never understand why newborns get so upset- the thought of being lifted up by you by my ankles and having my arse slapped is quite appealing :)

Jean Murray
Date: 12/4/2017 9:19:00 AM

OK then.

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/4/2017 8:36:00 AM

......but you haven't factored in my lumbago or vertigo. You may have to make do with patting me on the head and ruffling my hair while i breathe heavily.

Jean Murray
Date: 12/4/2017 6:40:00 AM

Let me see now.....if I climb on to the now vacant labour ward bed, put my feet in the stirrup straps for extra security, you lie naked on the floor with your feet elevated....by God I think we might manage it Viv..