Pandemonium

Pandemonium and lawless chaos sovereign-ties Authority they've placed on themselves Narrow -minded thinking they have supreme power Doltish rampant among docile people devoted to Enlightenment in their lives, but enthralled by empty Malignant influence words being exerted on society Optimistic about their oncoming future Nations can only be divided In continual and dynamic oppositions. United, people of the world yearn for securities of structured social order . We Must make ourselves strong 8/5/2016

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Jean Murray

Date: 8/8/2016 5:26:00 AM

Spot on Eve. All of us are wondering where it's going to end. Congatulations.

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/7/2016 10:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Eve :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/7/2016 8:39:00 PM

Congrats!!! on placing Eve...well done my friend...^WW^

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/7/2016 7:20:00 PM

Congrats Eve to win on your nice piece.Hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 8/7/2016 6:47:00 PM

Eve, a wonderful acrostic lady, congrats! :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2016 6:28:00 PM

A 7 for this winning poem, Eve! Janice

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/7/2016 5:25:00 PM

A very powerful Acrostic, Eve. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2016 8:55:00 PM

yes, we must ALL be strong in the whole world to stand up to these ignorant fiends. Good job with the challenge, Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2016 2:46:00 PM

- A wonderful Acrostic poems Eve, with meaningful lines ..... love the end - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/6/2016 11:17:00 AM

A very good pandemonium poem well writing x

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/6/2016 10:50:00 AM

Oh Eve I really like this poem! You have expressed this topic so well Hugs!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/6/2016 8:27:00 AM

I think you got it, Eve - the elements sought by the sponsor, plus a hard punch at the end. I enjoyed your Acrostic and the thoughts in each line ... CayCay

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/5/2016 10:28:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work and good luck in the contest.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/5/2016 8:51:00 PM

Very well done my friend Eve...so true...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/5/2016 7:09:00 PM

You are so right Mrs Eve. We each have a responsibility to ourselves to be strong and not depend on narrow minded governmental leaders. An excellent acrostic!