Pandemonium

Pandemonium and lawless chaos sovereign-ties

Authority they've placed on themselves

Narrow -minded thinking they have supreme power

Doltish rampant among docile people devoted to 

Enlightenment   in their lives, but enthralled by empty

Malignant influence words being exerted on society 

Optimistic about their oncoming future

Nations can only be divided

In continual and dynamic oppositions.

United, people of the world yearn for securities of structured social order . We

Must make ourselves strong


8/5/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Spot on Eve. All of us are wondering where it's going to end. Congatulations.
Leiser Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve :)
Warrior Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Congrats!!! on placing Eve...well done my friend...^WW^
Dutta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Congrats Eve to win on your nice piece.Hugs
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Eve, a wonderful acrostic lady, congrats! :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:28 PM
A 7 for this winning poem, Eve! Janice
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 5:25 PM
A very powerful Acrostic, Eve. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 8:55 PM
yes, we must ALL be strong in the whole world to stand up to these ignorant fiends. Good job with the challenge, Eve!
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 2:46 PM
- A wonderful Acrostic poems Eve, with meaningful lines ..... love the end - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 11:17 AM
A very good pandemonium poem well writing x
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Oh Eve I really like this poem! You have expressed this topic so well Hugs!
Godwin Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 8:27 AM
I think you got it, Eve - the elements sought by the sponsor, plus a hard punch at the end. I enjoyed your Acrostic and the thoughts in each line ... CayCay
Kent Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Enjoyed reading your work and good luck in the contest.
Warrior Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Very well done my friend Eve...so true...god bless...^WW^
Turner Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 7:09 PM
You are so right Mrs Eve. We each have a responsibility to ourselves to be strong and not depend on narrow minded governmental leaders. An excellent acrostic!
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