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Pandemonium

Peril lurks around our children As they play and walk to school. Nighttime's goblins have a rival; Daytime's just as bad a ghoul. Evil's names are myriad, Murderer and terrorist; Others--racist, rapist, hater . . . Neverending is the list. In this time of chaos rife, Unrelenting fear and strife, My prayers are for a peaceful life. September 14, 2016, entered in Brian Strand's Contest Number 202 (any form or theme, 12 lines max)

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Date: 8/8/2016 9:40:00 PM
Janice, love your poem congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/8/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 8/8/2016 12:44:00 PM
Very simple and true,loved it Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/8/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 10:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 10:44:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for a winning effort that even I can understand. Congratulations Janice...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 9:24:00 PM
THANKS, Charlie! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 6:46:00 PM
Janice, congrats on your placement lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:20:00 PM
this was a very well deserved win, Janice. Congrats to you TWO!!! (you placed high!!)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 5:23:00 PM
excellent acrostic on the pandemonium theme Janice. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 5:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 8/7/2016 5:19:00 PM
Janice, your Acrostic is very compact but images the enormous perils that haunt us today. Well done, and congratulations on your fine podium win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/7/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 8/4/2016 6:29:00 PM
good way to do this one, thinking of the future generation and the perils that await them. Sadly!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/4/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Janice
Date: 8/4/2016 4:14:00 AM
Great write. Pandemonium indeed.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/4/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai! Janice
Date: 8/2/2016 6:49:00 AM
Another great acrostic Janice. Pandemonium is everywhere, especially these days.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/2/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Daniel! Janice
Date: 8/2/2016 6:07:00 AM
Superb write ... gl ....
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/2/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Probir! Janice

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