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Pandemonium

Peace has never been given beneath the withered dust of steadfast war Armies gather in unity fighting for disagreements of what we’re here for Negotiations have been sacrificed for the loyalty of a forgotten country Democratic and republican parties forget the reasons we need to be free Entering a new era of racism and conflict, no union can be easily found Men and women proudly on the front line so we won’t become homebound Opportunities for jobs await while the world worries about their tweets Nine eleven created an outbreak of anxiety to walk the city streets Isis is in France with suicide bombers creating slaughters of the masses Underneath bridges lies starvation, let us pray this poverty passes Maybe with proper leadership we can try to rid the world of fascists Date Written: July 27, 2016

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Date: 8/8/2016 9:41:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/8/2016 9:06:00 PM
It seems always a battle luloo and your poem shares all our concerns. This is brilliantly written and deserves your high placement my friend. Kudos! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/8/2016 12:45:00 PM
Each word rings so true,congrats Laura!
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:39:00 PM
Very well written, informative pandemonium acrostic, Laura! Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 8/7/2016 8:35:00 PM
Superbly done my friend Laura...congrats!!on placement...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/7/2016 7:51:00 PM
A great poem - well placed :)
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:24:00 PM
A 7 for your WINNING poem, Laura Loo. Janice
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Date: 8/7/2016 5:21:00 PM
So much imagery of 'pandemonium' in your Acrostic, Laura. Well done, and congratulations on your fine podium win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/28/2016 1:06:00 AM
So sad that it just keeps on this way forever and ever. A clever way to use that word, Laura Loo!! I hope I can do as well.
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:55:00 PM
Very well expressed opinion/s on pandemonium, Laura. What we need is a brand new start, politically and religiously. Ideals and beliefs have been twisted and corrupted. Need for a rebirth! ~ Best wishes...paul
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