Pancakes

In the kitchen i am.. I mixed and make.. Then Cooking pancakes. Come, try and take.. Tastes, cream and sweet.. Making you fingers drum in beats.. Made by tender hands fit.. Humming in tweet and wit... Paired with coffee or juice.. Pick and choose.. Ill serve you good not lose.. Twinkling eyes in pose..

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James Fraser

Date: 10/13/2014 2:41:00 PM

Yummy pancakes in the kitchen Olive cooked. Shout me over and I'll take a look. Hey they look great, a tasty treat, a touch of syrup as I start to eat. Taste buds sense this delightful snack, but it's time for me to go, but I'll soon be back :) James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2015 3:19:00 AM

Thanks much James.. :) I am so glad you like this poem.. :)! maybe someday you will taste one that I made.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 12:32:00 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2013 6:50:00 AM

thanks:) featured poem??? how :O ?