Panacea

   Panacea
       
Panacea…       
Goodbye, my love, do not fear, I am here, no more tear.
   Dear dear, no more fear, in my dream, reappear, reappear.
Wake up dear, can you hear? Wake up, my love, fly like dove.
   I am here; kiss me dear, mommy dear, I am near.
With my two eyes, I taste your lips; panacea was all your kiss.
   I am aware, from far away, go, my dear, with no more fear.
Your love, my world, your love my book, you're the world, I was the look,
   Your voice shall chant in my silence, I can hear, so clear.
Come back, dear, I am in pain; I need to see, come back to me.
   Pain and darkness, night and silence, all are here; I am here.
Lonely I am, silent shadows calling your name, always the same.
   Go, my dear, go to heaven, all the angels full of cheer.
Without your touch, nothing feels right; my days are night,
   My nights are long, full of fear; what do I need? A burning spear.
Your world, “Haloo” shattered with pain, tears falling, falling like rain;
   Panacea is just a dream; I just want to disappear.

For Mom
10/27/16 Haloo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/3/2018 2:27:00 PM
I have tears reading your poem Pashang, you must miss her so so much. I can feel your pain in every line and the phrase 'my days are night' is very hard hitting and I'm sure many can relate to this with the death of a treasured parent. Extra hugs my friend, jan xx
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Date: 4/4/2018 12:15:00 PM
I did Pashang, I wish her eyesight was good enough to see me immortalised in your poem i have told her all about it and how honoured I am xx!:-) hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/4/2018 1:23:00 AM
Thanks Jan.... Did you hug your mom for me... I'm sending my love from this side of the pond....
Date: 3/18/2017 7:54:00 AM
It is what I feel about my father, God bless old souls.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/19/2017 2:03:00 AM
Indeed... Thank you for your visit Elaheh..
Date: 1/15/2017 1:43:00 PM
Hi Pashang. Lost myother in May last year I got completely cracked up. This Ghazal form you are so great with. It looks so extremely difficult a form to master. What a fantastic tribute to her. Jannie
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/26/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I'm weeping...
Date: 12/30/2016 9:08:00 PM
What a heartfelt piece, and I'm so sorry for your loss, Pashang. My prayers for you. Hugs x
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/31/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you my dear, you're so kind....
Date: 12/29/2016 3:15:00 PM
Pashang, this is so sad but beautifully written, losing a loved one is really disheartening.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/30/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thank you dear friend...
Date: 12/18/2016 10:18:00 PM
It seems that you loved your mom very deeply and there is great loss expressed here. Well written. Flows well too.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2016 1:32:00 PM
Yes I did.. thank you
Date: 12/3/2016 8:04:00 PM
aw this is so sad :( Hugs x
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/4/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thanks dear....
Date: 11/21/2016 9:06:00 PM
Pashang. My eyes swelled with tears after reading this...What a moving piece. Thank you for sharing. = Wesley C.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/24/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Wesley..... The loss of a mother is extremely painful.
Date: 11/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
I can't imagine a more beautiful more touching more perfect write for your mother. You did her proud. My condolences. I feel her importance in your words. She must of been an incredible person. I wish you peace and love and I must fav this impeccable expression of your love for your mother.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Maurice,
Date: 11/11/2016 1:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Ghazal..These are not so easy to write so I admire your having tried this difficult verse..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/14/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Sara you're so kind
Date: 11/11/2016 8:57:00 AM
- A deeply moving poem, Pashang - Beautifully written - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/11/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, you're so kind..
Date: 11/10/2016 8:06:00 PM
You are so good with this form, Pashang. This is very lovely.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/11/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 11/10/2016 11:28:00 AM
Oh my... like the child we all are forever to our mothers, you cry out for her Pashang. I have tears. I am sorry for your loss.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/11/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Jean, it is very difficult..... I'm lost...
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