Panacea

   Panacea
       
Panacea…       
Goodbye, my love, do not fear, I am here, no more tear.
   Dear dear, no more fear, in my dream, reappear, reappear.
Wake up dear, can you hear? Wake up, my love, fly like dove.
   I am here; kiss me dear, mommy dear, I am near.
With my two eyes, I taste your lips; panacea was all your kiss.
   I am aware, from far away, go, my dear, with no more fear.
Your love, my world, your love my book, you're the world, I was the look,
   Your voice shall chant in my silence, I can hear, so clear.
Come back, dear, I am in pain; I need to see, come back to me.
   Pain and darkness, night and silence, all are here; I am here.
Lonely I am, silent shadows calling your name, always the same.
   Go, my dear, go to heaven, all the angels full of cheer.
Without your touch, nothing feels right; my days are night,
   My nights are long, full of fear; what do I need? A burning spear.
Your world, “Haloo” shattered with pain, tears falling, falling like rain;
   Panacea is just a dream; I just want to disappear.

For Mom
10/27/16 Haloo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:27 PM
I have tears reading your poem Pashang, you must miss her so so much. I can feel your pain in every line and the phrase 'my days are night' is very hard hitting and I'm sure many can relate to this with the death of a treasured parent. Extra hugs my friend, jan xx
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 12:15 PM
I did Pashang, I wish her eyesight was good enough to see me immortalised in your poem i have told her all about it and how honoured I am xx!:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 1:23 AM
Thanks Jan.... Did you hug your mom for me... I'm sending my love from this side of the pond....
Abdi Langaan  Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 7:54 AM
It is what I feel about my father, God bless old souls.
Salehi Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Indeed... Thank you for your visit Elaheh..
Breedt Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Hi Pashang. Lost myother in May last year I got completely cracked up. This Ghazal form you are so great with. It looks so extremely difficult a form to master. What a fantastic tribute to her. Jannie
Salehi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thank you my friend. I'm weeping...
Downing  Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 9:08 PM
What a heartfelt piece, and I'm so sorry for your loss, Pashang. My prayers for you. Hugs x
Salehi Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Thank you my dear, you're so kind....
Ogundare Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Pashang, this is so sad but beautifully written, losing a loved one is really disheartening.
Salehi Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Thank you dear friend...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 10:18 PM
It seems that you loved your mom very deeply and there is great loss expressed here. Well written. Flows well too.
Salehi Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Yes I did.. thank you
Teagan Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 8:04 PM
aw this is so sad :( Hugs x
Salehi Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Thanks dear....
Cadet Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Pashang. My eyes swelled with tears after reading this...What a moving piece. Thank you for sharing. = Wesley C.
Salehi Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Wesley..... The loss of a mother is extremely painful.
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM
I can't imagine a more beautiful more touching more perfect write for your mother. You did her proud. My condolences. I feel her importance in your words. She must of been an incredible person. I wish you peace and love and I must fav this impeccable expression of your love for your mother.
Salehi Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Maurice,
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Enjoyed reading your Ghazal..These are not so easy to write so I admire your having tried this difficult verse..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Salehi Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Sara you're so kind
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:57 AM
- A deeply moving poem, Pashang - Beautifully written - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, you're so kind..
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:06 PM
You are so good with this form, Pashang. This is very lovely.
Salehi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Oh my... like the child we all are forever to our mothers, you cry out for her Pashang. I have tears. I am sorry for your loss.
Salehi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Jean, it is very difficult..... I'm lost...
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