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Palomino

on his regal waves
galloped by my gallant knight
marvel to behold
his daintiness is a prize
I wish for a tandem ride





March 8, 2015  7.30 pm

tanka

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Weston Gregory

March 19, 2016 at 9:14 AM

Visual elegance prized in word, nicely done

John Fleming

October 28, 2015 at 3:56 AM

Very elegant, leonora...nicely penned! Best regards! :-) john

Len Gasun

October 31, 2015 at 8:29 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by my dear friend john and your very encouraging feedback on my poem. Hugs back at you!

Dorian Petersen Potter

April 22, 2015 at 1:01 AM

Excellent pen Leonora!I just love horses a lot and your tanka is very nice my very dear friend. Very much enjoyed it. A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs! xxx D.

Len Gasun

April 25, 2015 at 8:39 AM

Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend, Dorian! Those are another very inspiring and encouraging words from you. I'm so elated and honored to read them tonight and your very lovely visit. Wishing you a very lovely week/ weekend as well my very dear friend. God bless you always, too! Many hugs to you!

Paul Callus

March 26, 2015 at 5:48 PM

A lovely and creative Tanka, Leonora. Very striking imagery and ending line. #7 Hugs // paul

Len Gasun

April 13, 2015 at 9:15 PM

Thank you so much for the very wonderful comment my dear friend, Paul and your precious time reading my poem. More blessings to you. Many hugs!

Sara Kendrick

March 25, 2015 at 12:40 PM

Ahh! Beautiful picture.. Creative work written about it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Len Gasun

March 25, 2015 at 12:43 PM

You are much welcome my very dear friend, Sara. Thank you so much as well for stopping by and your lovely comment. Biggest hugs!

Nette Onclaud

March 24, 2015 at 1:13 PM

ohhh, I'm tickled pink with your charming images,dear lory.. I can't send soupie at this time due to system errors here.. miss you, my dear... not going to bkk this holy week... awhh.. huggs

Len Gasun

March 25, 2015 at 11:53 AM

coming? Why? My mom will be coming to visit me. She'll arrive tom. night with my bro. and boyfriend and mom will be staying for a month or more. If you come, pls let me know ok. Miss you too my very dear friend. Many hugs!

Len Gasun

March 25, 2015 at 11:47 AM

Oh, thank you my very dear friend, Nette! I'm glad you stopped by and read my simple poem. Thank you so much. Just arrived home. Went with my friends in a movie:)))Today is my first day of school break 'coz many of my colleagues went to Japan for a trip. Didnt go this time 'coz my length of service disqualified me :(:(. By the way, when exactly be the holy week? We don't have it here so we'll have summer class on March 30-April 29. Are you not

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2015 at 1:03 PM

- Dear Leonora ..... so strange that your name turned up today - I have thought of you several times today !!!! - (Can you hear my thoughts?) - Miss you much, hope all is well with you - ....... - My daughter was a "horse girl", in 1992 she became Norwegian Champion of the Handicap horse riding - A great poem!! - Hugs & <3 //Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

March 25, 2015 at 11:39 AM

;))Thank you so much for reading my poem and thinking of me my very dear friend Anne Lise. Maybe I have ESP or mental telepathy:)))). Miss you so much too. Wow! Your daughter was a " horse girl " before? Me, I'd experienced riding a horse in Jordan and it was so nice. Pls. say Hi to your daughter for me. please. Thank you. Biggest hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

March 17, 2015 at 6:03 AM

Well imagery write. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 10:21 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi. Biggest hug!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

March 16, 2015 at 8:29 AM

Fantastic and imaginative short n sweet poem! Nice ride n read. It was great just readin it.

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:04 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, S.Zaynub. Biggest hugs!

Cecilia Macfarlane

March 9, 2015 at 9:04 PM

I can picture you and your knight riding off together in the sunset, wonderful write. Hugs

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:10 AM

;))) Thank you so much my very dear friend of mine, Cecilia. Biggest hugs!

Skat A

March 8, 2015 at 6:29 PM

A beautiful poem Sweet Leonora. A charming way to end the day... Love SKAT

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Thank you so much my dearest poet sis and friend, Skat. Biggest hugs!

Jan Allison

March 8, 2015 at 5:46 PM

such beautiful imagery Leonora... enjoy the ride:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:22 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Jan! Biggest hugs!

Tim Smith

March 8, 2015 at 4:57 PM

ride away with your knight...beautiful...hugs Tim

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:29 AM

:)))) Thank you so much my very dear friend, Tim. Biggest hugs!

Aiyah Torres

March 8, 2015 at 9:43 AM

Whew!!! .. hope you'll have a great ride... how are you>!!>! .. it's been a while, my friend.. and I missed you!!.. I wish you're always in a good hands, happy and healthy at all times... :"))

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 11:40 AM

;))))) Thank you so much my very dear friend, Aiyah. I missed you too, my very dear friend and so with the rests here! I was so busy too (super-duper). So, i am so sorry. Despite of that, got some concerns with my health ;) but, hope i'll continue to be fine especially this coming vacation (5 days). Hope you're doing fine too. I was keeping you all in my thoughts and prayers. Biggest hugs!