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Palm Tree Island

Vibrant date palms Swayed with the breeze Hues of green and yellow Mixed with red and brown Lawns of soft green grass Tingled my feet Inviting me to sit on it Smelling an occasional wild flower The sound of the sea The taste of salt My eyes closed in a dream My senses mingled with music A shout from the pool A splash in the sea Sound of hooves on the stone With them holding my hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2011 3:12:00 PM
AHA, I went back and found this sweet poem of yours I had not read yet. I would like to be on this island!
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:41:00 AM
Wonderful Imagery Tahera ... congrates on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:18:00 AM
TAHERA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:42:00 PM
congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Tahera...P.D.
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:46:00 PM
nice Tahera and congratulations to you.
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:21:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Tahera! Enjoy your win.. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:51:00 AM
How I would love to visit this beautiful island with you, Tahera. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Tahera for your preceptions of the freedom of nature's Love. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:01:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in John's contest with these lovely words so poignat my friend.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with luv...
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:57:00 PM
Tahera, a very lovely and wonderful poem. A little curious at the end, but well enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:57:00 PM
very nice description and imagergy. great poem
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