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Palliative Hallucinations

The tip of a finger, barely touching ulcerated skin Chamfered ache of reason, or finely balanced whim Forced through a reality, where spoons become bent Into the pleasure dome, they inject gaseous cement Climbing on rope ladders, spiraling around a kite Wrestling fallen angels, fighting dirty feel them bite Lost all my inhibitions, its so embarrassing to say Oscillating and twitching, surreal pictures portray Sensing victory I keep goofing, running out of time Finish line is furious, for committing such crimes Living with rules is for suckers, I’m partial to a kiss Goalposts keep changing, guess it’s worth the risk Haphazard directions, circumnavigating the void I’m delirious anyway, eventually all life is destroyed Chasing weird dreams, in this semiconscious state Staring blank at the ceiling, while my agony abates At last the heavens open, broken arrow was called O God it’s beautiful, cascading insouciance befalls Forensics tend to differ, I’ve probably gone insane Don’t care anymore, cos these drugs numb my pain Writing Prompt - Ache - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 24/04/2021

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:53:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your Rhyme poem, so easy to get hooked on drugs when sick in hospital, it happens too often, well done, love _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/28/2021 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Constance, I’m so delighted to get a placement, So many are totally dependent on these powerful mind altering pain killing drugs, and it’s totally understandable why, cheers David
Date: 4/26/2021 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice placement contest win dear David, my very best wishes // Regards, Lasaad
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/28/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad, I’m always delighted with a placement, as indeed I am with your comments, cheers David
Date: 4/24/2021 10:25:00 AM
Ah, at my age I can relate to many of your images, David, and I certainly rely on lots of prescribed drugs to "numb my pain." Nice write, friend.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/24/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Milton, I’ve had episodes of extreme pain in the past, where the only relief was ketamine and opioid intervention, those hallucinogenic images are probably different for everyone, but a very real side effect nonetheless, cheers David
Date: 4/24/2021 10:14:00 AM
It is a delight to read them very well-written verses; I wish you good luck in the contest. Best regards David
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Date: 4/24/2021 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Lasaad, trying to express the side effects of them end of life powerful opioids, drifting in and out of consciousness, where the lines of sanity become blurred, trying to balance the hallucinations whilst numbing pain, is a very difficult and unsettling process. Cheers David

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