Palindrome Poem

One eve,
my mum, dad and sis
took the kayak;
they spent ages,
until noon
the next day,
searching for
the poop deck.
Once they realised
their boob,
they set off
on their adventure,
both sexes
equally excited
about the quest
to save the giant blue tit.

There are quite a few palindromes here, but four of them are kayak, poop, sexes and tit
For David’s contest
Jack Horne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Interesting work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Fun to read another tricky contest entry...you made it work beautifully!! Well done, Jack!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Well done Jack, Congratulations xx
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Jack. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Funny Jack, should tickle David's funny bone as it did mine. All the best in the contest! :)
Song Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 1:10 AM
Word play, word play! Funny entry, Jack...First of a kind contest like this...Thanks for stopping over to read my list! Love, Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:42 PM
hahaha,This is pretty cool, Jack!! So I take it boob has more than one meaning!!!
Sivey Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Oh wow, this is a glorious write my friend! I really liked how you created your poem and put it all together! You have many palindromes in your poem which I really enjoyed! Great Work!!
Devonshire Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 3:42 PM
LOL, Boobs are also called tits here and I used both of those palindromes too (boob & tit). I'm trying to imagine you and Sue setting out on this quest. Be sure to take your video camera! Now I'm going to watch the DVD you sent. Thanks, Jack! Great entry for the contest, my friend, and winning wishes are headed to you. Love, Carolyn
Bauer Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 1:31 PM
clever and creative! nice one.
Bombardieri Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:57 AM
palindromes are hard, eh Jack? You did a great job here! good luck in the contest:)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:45 AM
marvelous construction of the form Jack with a cute story to boot luv.. I see all the words as I used many too.. good luck luv.. hope they got there in time.. oh..
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