Manny Galvan Poet I do not know?

Palindrome

Lewd acts of which I cannot name

Sin once reviled me to this state

I act no more; to live is bliss

Indebted to a nameless God?

Dare I not change, yet hold a tenet?

Take my beating of common dog,

Burn the callous of evil ways

Deliver me from past life, to 

Dwel in peace of Ungrateful Change


Dwel in peace of Ungrateful Change
 
Deliver me from past life, to 

Burn the callous of evil ways

Take my beating of common dog,

Dare I not change, yet hold a tenet?

Indebted to a nameless God?

I act no more; to live is bliss

Sin once reviled me to this state

Lewd acts of which I cannot name

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Corrisa Jacomini March 22, 2009 at 7:19 PM Very impressed :)

Caryl Muzzey March 17, 2009 at 6:27 PM Very nicely done. This is not an easy form to write either if you want it to sound right. I must commend you. Caryl

Autumn Rose Wood March 17, 2009 at 4:28 PM WOW!

Ernilando Tugaff March 17, 2009 at 12:51 PM Hi Manny, welcome to the soupland. Kepp on posting. Ernilando