PALEO POLARITY

  
hands rapturously slashing satori, bang !
light droplets filter down, bats brushing skin 
to fly knowingly low, then water gushed
through cracks, bring —
snakes, spiders, scorpions across our toes
stones spoke in singular sighs as 
golden orb set in whirlwinds high
velvet night descends, opposites attract
poles swing — >

cave was nowhere, yet everywhere 
Mozart symphonies were future 
shadows written on our vacant palms
 to sojourn with Harry the Strandloper 
was unspoken song by GRACIOUS ALL 
for beloved paleo pole points, Call ! 
Khoisan shores we tread profoundly 
adorned with seashell bracelets 
before on red concert seats to 
sit enraptured, opposites horned 

no thoughts tornadoed continents waiting
our ignited centres spaced dichotomy 
unnamed species inhabited surrounds
we knew not of wisdom pounds
crystal shafts in dimness protected
our irises reflecting stalactite,
dolomite, Dynamite !
anchovy offering themselves
 for hunger appeased
white-black apart yet fulcrum starts

we were Power of One in two
~ seasons our compass 
naked emperor with empress embraced
celebration, protection or 
fool interventions unknown 
variables, not yet defined 

contrary poles merging with heather 
whispering as copper painted patterns 
etheric on grotto’s sotto ~
voices faraway clamped our knees
 it was future shackles of Bastille 
through time tunnels terrible 
vacant minds a pair to stare
simply sky, earth, two lode stars as one 
wolves, bears, squirrel frequencies 
to dare a similar stare !

womb then lustily grew —
berries, tubers fat ripe
nipples started leaking, crows cackled
she was born in running river, pinking water 
cord to trout we fed, who offered us  
their firm flesh in turn
clouds melted into navel smooth 
moon our compass soon enabled
cavern walls slapping spring to bring

spirit expanded fontanelle 
winds chiming bells
hammer forged to chop stone found
swallows still equalled fellow tribes  
harmonious cynosures more inscribed 

my eyes drew out his to flush awake
nostrils flared flaked, two at stake
slowly malachite dragons dissolved
paleo quintessences evolved 
swinging space-time into now 
once more polarity’s 
sublime ~ 


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3rd Placement: Premier Contest 
Rob Carmack: July 26
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Carmack Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Reader's Note: Exceptional imagery. Thanks and congrats!
Daniels Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 9:02 AM
ThkU for hosting & charitable poetic time, Dear Sir...got a bit lost in regression with this one. God bless you & yours.
Daniels Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:22 PM
Poet’s Note : Confirm: no ai used in crafting poem
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