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Pale Moon Rising

paling sunlight dips beneath the shimmering sea ~ pearl moon on the rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Robert Lindley
Date: 11/21/2021 2:53:00 PM
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Exquisitely beautiful imagery depicted in this first class haiku my friend. I've watch the sun as sunset deep into the ocean and could almost hear the sizzle as it slowly sank out of sight. Your poem reminds me of that experience. A fav.. God bless..
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2021 3:58:00 AM
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Your kind accolades make me smile, Robert. What a great thought about the sun's heat sizzling as it sinks into the sea. Love it!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/19/2021 3:17:00 PM
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Absolutely stunning imagery!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2021 4:08:00 AM
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Such a fine comment. Thanks, Mark.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/19/2021 5:47:00 AM
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Picturesque. I am not much good at short poems. ~~
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2021 4:08:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/18/2021 5:01:00 PM
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Lovely haiku Lin..
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2021 4:23:00 AM
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Thanks very much, Joseph.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2021 2:49:00 PM
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delight imagery Lin, I love poems about la Luna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2021 4:23:00 AM
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oh you know I do, too. Thanks, Jan.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/18/2021 8:32:00 AM
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Beautiful image Lin, have witnessed that scene many times in Turkey over the Aegean sea. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2021 4:23:00 AM
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Hiya, Tom. I bet you did some spectacular skies in Turkey. Thank you for commenting.

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